Monday 17 March 2014
Monday Quick Writes
If I was I was a Animal I will be A dog because I can play outside all day.I can taste dog food and run fast. My owner will take me to the park to play fetch or play on the park. I will meet new dogs and talk in dog language to other dogs to make friends. I will be a super spy dog helping dogs in trouble or people. I would want to be the riches dog in the world. I would also want a good owner.
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You have written some great sentences Sylis and used fullstops correctly. Sometimes words in the middle of a sentence need a capital letter. Why have you put one on Animal and A?
ReplyDeleteI need to be more careful when I do my writing.
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